Thursday, October 23, 2008
Napoleon
The animals excepted napoleon's lies for a number of reasons. One reason they think that the leader is always right. Boxer says that napoleon is always right. Also one of Napoleon's friends Squealer was a very persuasive pig. That help trick the animals into doing whatever. The horses were not that bright. They had a hard time trying to think things out foe themselves. They believed things easily. All in all the animals believed the pigs for a number of reasons.
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Really strong reasons (yellows) and good topic sentence.
Each yellows should have 2 reds that are evidence from the text, including 2 quotes. Also, your final sentence should be more different from your first sentence.
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